rate_review Reviews

The story is still just simply amazing. I love all the new developments and characters you are continuing to introduce. All the back story you are filling is really is adding to the depth of things. And of course, the continuing relationship developments (and smut) are always very much welcome indeed. :)

With all these new developments there are so many things I'm looking forward to reading about how they're going to turn out. I don't think there will be a chapter that will ever be boring from you at all. Oh, and I didn't notice any problems in the quality with the recent chapter, it was totally fine when I read it.

Great job as always!
-DGD

I have to say, I passed over this story a couple times. But, I am glad I finally started reading it. It is wonderful so far.

Oh, fantastic! I'm slighty envious of miss Amelia.

I love Raz'ha, I really do. Amelia really needs to stop fighting it. XD

I really am enjoying your story, your writing style is obviously finely tuned. I see almost no errors whatsoever. It's been a joy reading so far.

Oh, why must there be 3 chapters and no humping? Lol, yes, I know it doesn't work with the story. I admit it, I am a real big fan of this fanfic, which is why I will sit twiddling my thumbs while I wait for a new chapter.

8... good chappy... the fightingh... and the whole period drama was fun... and than the end... the plot thickens

I am loving each and every naughty/sweet bit your story has to offer! And thank you for reviewing my Predator story! :D Can't wait for more naughtiness!!! ^o^

Yay another chapter! I do like the possibility of Amelia and Raz'ha hooking up. Their relationship is becoming innocent, yet amusingly awkward! I want to see more Amelia and Raz'ha action!! Anything will do! lol

Once again, amazingly well written and everything. The characters and their interactions are just so endearing, you've really wrote them so well. I loved the soda can thing too, that was yet another humorous tangent of yours, but undeniably funny. And the puppies are indeed cute, and the way you are so descriptive with their mannerisms and actions only makes them more so, especially the alien puppy too :)

I can see their concern though, it's probably like how most people view baby bears ("teddy bears") as the cutest things as can be, but when they grow to adults, well, yeah, usually bad things happen trying to be friendly with an adult bear. Hopefully the Hound becomes a great guard dog.

Poor Rah'za still not getting any, got to admire his perseverance. But I guess he'll have him to himself for a while in just a little bit of time. Amelia with him on his own ship should make for a very interesting setting. Can't wait to see what occurs!

-DGD

ahhhhhh I love the names ofcourse! (im a big fan of norse mythology- actually im pagan and my primary God in Ullr and my Goddess Freya)
I hope the injuried puppy's leg heals eventually

it was a fun chapy to read even without sex... the soda can was a funny bit...