rate_review Reviews

I didn't actually find anything that made me unsure about your story. When I read the first segment, I thought "Oh no, not a threesome/moresome story." I rarely come across one that isn't awkward to me. But when I read yours, I really enjoyed it, and can't wait for the next chapter. I think your character development is great and intriguing. I'm truly drawn in and am on the edge of my seat. <3

Chapter six was great I really like the cute and 'awww' factor that the animals brought. I was having a horrible week and this chapter was right on time. Apparently even reading about pets is a stress reliever for me, lol. I feel almost as excited as Amelia with the alien pet. Although it is an Yautjan domesticated animal I hope there won't be any incidents like with some people who try to keep lions, bears, or wolves as pets. I wonder what they will be named. I don't think I foresee Fluffy being used at all, lol.

I love your style of writing and the depth the details bring; like pets lowing blood pressure/ raising longevity, Mah'sic wanting to do scans on her brain, the intellegence of the Yaut hound. I also enjoy the pacing. You're not taking things to fast or rushing Amelia's feelings for Raz'ha. Amelia is so down to earth, and I like how she seems to take the things in her life in stride. Being very understanding of how Yautja society views her and her place in society. It was great to see Raz'ha and even Mah'sic being so protective of Amelia. '...That is called prostitution and it is a crime.' was a line that made me laugh. I can't wait for more and I really apprieciate you writing this story. It brings me so much joy to read. Thanks!

Ooh I hope Amelia and Raz'ha hook up - they're so cute!! Plus PUPPIES! I want an alien puppy! Keep writing - I want to read more!

I really like this story. I wasn't sure at first, but you really drew me in. Raz'ha is so sweet!! <3

Very nice chapter.
Good to see that she has a backbone XD
The end was really sweet:)

Love it! I just so love the way you write these chapters. It's a great sign of how good you are when you can make someone go "awwww" at the description and interactions of the doggy puppies and the alien puppy. And I just love how you keep such attention to detail, like Mah'sic continuously asking about her blood pressure (I can totally see her one day just snapping at him for that), or how you insert these funny anecdotes into things, like how you turned a covered gift into a hilarious joke about Santa Claus being a sex offender to be hunted down. :D

Anyway, you've earned leeway with this drought on sex scenes. I'd much rather you write them when you feel inspired, rather than trying to force them out. Usually makes for better smut that way :D

Again, great job! :)

I am loving this story. The puppy part is soo cute..more please!

Aww, I love the little puppies. They're so cute. Even the little Yaut Hound. I actually think he's my favorite. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next. I hope Val'jek lets Amelia keep the puppies.

6... I enjoyed that chappy! I look forward to learning the puppys' names and more

More please :D Really love this story :)
And I did like tha last chapter, I am just way to lazy to write reviews most of the time sorry :)