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Nice:) Hope she will like the puppies. I know I would^^

Heh, that was a cool chapter. That ended up being quite a task for poor Raz'ha who just wanted a single puppy. The poor guy is trying so hard. I had to read over it twice but I did get the whole bartering scene down and it did make sense. Infuriating though, but that was the point of course, since all he wanted was a puppy and was willing to give his precious dagger just for that. Too bad Yautja honor is really pervasive with their merchants (certainly the opposite of every human merchant). Amelia's reaction will be fun. Hopefully she gives the guy a bit more respect given how much annoyance he's enduring.

Great job! Can't wait for more. :)
-DGD

It is nice to come back to new multi chapters :) The story is fleshing out nicely. I am now getting emotionally invested in the players. I think this is going to turn out to be an outstanding work of fanfiction.

LOVE IT!! This has to be my fav chapter so far! I hope Am gets back and harasses Raz into letting her keep the Yaut hound too hahaha

Very good chapter. I loved it. I'm enjoying the awkward interactions between Amelia and Raz'ha and I hope to be seeing more of that. Can't wait to see her reaction to the puppies. And, also, I loved your last chapter as well, just forgot to review it. I hope to be reading more soon. Great job and good luck with the future chapters. Oh, and I'm very excited about the Predators movie coming out.

I seemed to have missed the update of chapter 4 so I got to read 2 chapters... hahaha i have to laugh at the puppys references... and now i look forward to ch 6 and Amelies reaction... bet she is all over the injury lame pup

Still greatly enjoying this story very much. I love how you're putting in so many details with the Raz'ha trying to figure out things about Amelia and how to get her to like him. The poor guy hasn't got a clue, which makes for some hilarious misunderstandings and such. Other than that, your writing style is still incredibly hot and I will be eagerly awaiting what situations you'll put these three through next. :)

-DGD

A.W.E.S.O.M.E. !!!!!
I've just finished the first three chapters and I think this story is just awesome.
I look forward to more.

Wow, this is an awesome fic. I especially like how you have no qualms about diving head first right into the smut (well, relatively speaking compared to most stories. But still allowing for some great buildup), yet the writing is constant in its quality (ie. awesome). I also like how you're filling in the back-story as you go forward rather than simply moving in a constant straight line. It also is unique that you began the story with the girl already living with the Preds, as opposed to the typical narration of starting off with that not being the case and having to spend time getting to that point, which no doubt helps with getting the smut out quickly. Certainly not a bad thing at all. :)

This is a great story and I cannot wait to see where you will take things from here. I mean, you started things off (again relatively speaking) with a threesome (something I believe more authors should have in their stories :D), so I can't wait to see what more you'll have in store. :D
-DGD

very sexy... your 3 main characters are very interesting... their relationship very involved... you had me on the edge of my seat in ch3 b/c i cared so much!