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for Carpe Diem Baby

by KCBailey

person DarkCheshire
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please oh please continue all including this story you are a awesome writer.
person Andrea
schedule December 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THIS STORY THE BEST YET KEEP GOING OMG I AM IN LOVE. BALLY HOW GREAT A NAME IS THAT.

ANDREA
person Abe
schedule January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please please please put the chapter up *puppy dog eyes* Why cant John see Bal loves him and he feels the same way? *pout*
person Anon
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:( are you ever going to finish this? You haven't uploaded in a while. I miss your stories. I hope everything's alright.
person Jennalyn
schedule May 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I DEMAND MORE.
person Darkening-Eden
schedule May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this seems to turn out really sad. Not that I'm complaining, actually I have a thing for dark stories.
And of course, it is sexy, too.
I love how you make the reader feel for both, Constantine and Balthazar; well, admittedly a little more for Balthazar.
You make him seem both, strong for enduring the physical and emotional pain for days without giving in, and vurnerable as he feels so much for Constantine and is willing to save him from loss at any cost, no matter what he does to him.
His breakdown in the latest chapter was very touching, and now you presage that things will get even worse...
Well, needless to say I'm curious.
person cactus
schedule May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so good! So hot and incredible and wonderful. I love how you make Balthasar so vulnerable and human, and I love that someone else hasnt forgotten about the Constantine fandom :) Please keep writing this, it'll make my year.

"He knew that nothing he said or did was going to make Constantine stop, or he'd have confessed already. /I love you, Johnny. Please don't hurt me anymore, I know I'm an asshole. I'll be good for you. Don't damn yourself again./ "

“I...I think I'm in love with you, but my mind feels so hazy. I can't remember, I... I know that I like being touched by you, even when you hurt me. But you always look at me with angry eyes.” Balthazar's voice dropped to a soft breath, eyes darkening. “You don't love me back, though. That's my real punishment, isn't it?”

I teared up :(
person Ebony
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think anything makes me happier than when I find out that you've updated :D
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you have no idea how much joy i feel when i see you've updated one of your stories. That's just how much i love your writing. blank-Balthazar sounded strangely cute. I bet John would have loved to keep him a bit longer. Poor Balthy. Poor John. Doesn't he realize he's in denial? loved the intro of full demon-Balthazar. those wings were pure awesome.
person Jennalyn
schedule April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. *clutching desk and breathing really fucking hard*

THIS. BEST YET.

Where have you been on MSN, baby? I miss spazzing at you.