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March 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story.........please write some more! I have read several Avatar fanfiction stories and this is definitely one of the better ones I've seen!!!!
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January 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
this was a good read! I like the idea of those two next being together. I love their teasing and fighting. Can't wait for them to realize that there are bigger feelings at play for them.
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately, it was so so.
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February 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic, Great job and please keep up on your work. Thanks for taking the time to write for us fans.
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May 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but Ikran don't have feathers...
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May 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story :D
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May 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"He began to take lesions from her in shooting a bow after two days, as did Christine and Arnd, the two teachers."
You mean lessons? As lesions means damage to the human body....
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"I had several ribs inside my eyes corneas on both eyes that healed only slowly and had an surgery on one of them too"
I have no clue what you mean by ribs but all I know is that ribs are the things near your lungs and are made out of bone and are no where near your eyes. (By the way hope you feel better now. I don't know how you did it.)
You mean lessons? As lesions means damage to the human body....
and
"I had several ribs inside my eyes corneas on both eyes that healed only slowly and had an surgery on one of them too"
I have no clue what you mean by ribs but all I know is that ribs are the things near your lungs and are made out of bone and are no where near your eyes. (By the way hope you feel better now. I don't know how you did it.)
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January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I finally finised reading all the available chappies. This story is so awesome, this story seems like the first Avatar story updated in a LONG TIME...it's really sad. BUT I am happy to see this one updated, and yes I understand there will be times when the authors seriously don't have enough time to update their stories. A sad fact of life for us readers but it is there, but thank you so much for updating and hope to see more chappies added to this story in the near future :D!
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June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I like that you've written a story where both Tsu'tey and Trudy survived the battle (I always hated the fact that they were killed in the movie) and I find the events amusing. :) The rivalry between Tsu'tey and Trudy is great and I like the introduction of the "secret lab" and Trudy's new Avatar.
I hope you update this story soon and I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing!
-WMM
I hope you update this story soon and I look forward to reading more. Thanks for sharing!
-WMM
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May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey suralley will you continue this its a very fun story and i'm enjoying it and would like to know if you are only going to write 5 chaptersw or is it going to be more than this