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May 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story, great sexual tension building. Enjoying your descriptive style, it really brings me into the story.
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
plz do chapter 5 soon
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh, wow, what a turbulent relationship these two have. From nearly killing each other to ending up in their arms. I almost thought the last part was a dream or hallucination, it did seem to end a bit abruptly. Either way I love how this story is progressing. It will be very interesting to see what comes from this new development and how that impacts the plans to have Kate "escape".
Can't wait for more. :)
-DGD
Can't wait for more. :)
-DGD
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can you watch your spelling and grammar a bit more?
i like the story, but can't get into it as much as i could if those mistakes didn't keep tripping me up
i like the story, but can't get into it as much as i could if those mistakes didn't keep tripping me up
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October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good you have made the Predators very intelligent stragetic hunters and for that I am very happy. I am quite interested in finding out what is going to happen next.
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Your writing style is amazing! I find myself holding my breath throughout the entire chapter, not exactly sure what will happen next.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still greatly enjoying this story. You did an awesome job giving off a sense of the pain and agony the poor girl was going through as she was tortured with that drug. And it is of course, very interesting how Eceri is trying to figure her out and juggle both his curiosity for her and of course his duty to getting the information from her.
Bravo as always. Looking forward to the next one! :)
-DGD
Bravo as always. Looking forward to the next one! :)
-DGD
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so hooked on this story and I can say that I missed some sleep when I saw that the next chapter was up...but it is so worth it and I can't wait for more.
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You really had me going there! Oh I hope you update soon. Stories like yours keep me from going insane here at base :D
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I said wow. :0
That was one of the most tension filled chapters I've ever read. Seriously, you haven't lost your touch at all during your hiatus, heck if anything, you've picked up a few things. I already love the dynamic that exists between the two of them and the intense friction built up. He, viewing her as something of interest, and her viewing him as something to loathe. What I love about your protagonist is she most certainly is not a Mary Sue at all. Her back-story and reactions are quite believable and realistic. I honestly have no idea where you will take this story and can't even guess upon future events, which is a great thing.
All I can say is, I'm totally hooked. You've got me again Nalani. :)
-DGD
That was one of the most tension filled chapters I've ever read. Seriously, you haven't lost your touch at all during your hiatus, heck if anything, you've picked up a few things. I already love the dynamic that exists between the two of them and the intense friction built up. He, viewing her as something of interest, and her viewing him as something to loathe. What I love about your protagonist is she most certainly is not a Mary Sue at all. Her back-story and reactions are quite believable and realistic. I honestly have no idea where you will take this story and can't even guess upon future events, which is a great thing.
All I can say is, I'm totally hooked. You've got me again Nalani. :)
-DGD