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Wow.... This story has captivated me... I really really hope to read more, as it's one of the better ones I've read here in a long time. I nearly cried when I realized there was no chapter eight, and at such a cliff hanger!!! I do hope you continue it!

hey! I just wanted to say I absolutely LOVE serendipity, and I'm looking forward sosososososososo much to the next chapter!
keep up the great writing!

OMG LOVING THIS! just started reading this last night (and it's now very early in the morning *eep*). awesome story adn plot. and i love the stalker cow and the "Squishy!" thing lmao. makes me think of the old bugs bunny cartoon with the abominable snowman squeezing bugs and petting him, going "i will love him, and hug him, and squeeze him, and call him george". so yeah, loving this, can't wait for the next chapter!

oh, wow, that was a great chapter. So, now they know about Sam. Curious to see how Skywarp reacts and what will happen with Megatron now that the original twelve have him now. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh man, I love this story. On the edge of my seat.

Hi. I really like this story. But ugh you had to stop on a cliffhanger. Is this story going to be a bot/human or is Sam going to still be with Mikeyla? Please e-mail me when the next chapter is up, thanks. bye.

I love this chapter! I actually feel bad for Megatron now...guess humans always complicate things somehow, don't they?

And is Bumblebee and Jolt still alive, just accidentally got teleported to Mars?

Mmm cupcakes.... :) Great new chapter!

I don't normally review stories but I just couldn't -not- review this one. I absolutely love how you've written everyone. Especially the Decepticons. Everyone tends to just lump them in the 'evil bastard' category and forget that there are levels...degrees even... of evil. And even then, its not really evil. They just have differing thoughts and views compared to the Autobots ones. That said, Star made my heart hurt. Having to deal with the death of so many hatchlings. I doubt I could deal with it and that fact that he does, despite the overwhelming despair and depression from each death, shows just how strong he is. I nearly cried imagining how he talked to each dying little life, holding them close as he shared with it everything fun life had to offer that it wouldn't get to experience, and how he committed their faces to his memory. That the last one, 615, would have been a seeker?? Oh man. Depressed me! Just thinking about it is making me misty eyed. Gotta move on..!

Though curious about what's going on with Sam, I'm more curious about how often its mentioned that Melosa and Alicia have 'parasites' inside them. It almost makes me wonder if the Decepticons are going to realize that perhaps they will have to follow Earth's example and carry their young inside them. That way both lives can get the energon they need to continue. Hmm.. Things are certainly becoming curiouser and curiouser. I look forward to future updates.

And I will have to try my hand at mech drawing again. There are some scenes that absolutely must be illustrated! Here's to hoping the How to Draw Transformers book I've had since I was a kid actually helps out. XD;

WOW. I have never really ever been interested in a transformers fic, but you have changed that. What a great story you have going