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October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really want to love this story... But there's too much bouncing and the comments about the mary sue shit are ruining it.
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August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You were doing really good...untill this last chapter. I followed the first 8 without trouble, but 9 I was only able to understand fragments of it... like the two kids, and what the hell was going on just before that...the only thing I understood was the tv report and the fact that they both get shot and prasumably die causeing the cops to go pick up the kids...how did the cops know about the kids?
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay I've never seen any of the halloween vids (freddy girl here) but I started reading this story cause I am crazy that way and its really nice...keep up the good work
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhh! This is a lovely start! I cannot wait to read more. Very well written. ^.^
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Ero
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Ero