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for Primal Matter

by Scienceteacher

person paw07
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I must state I should have checked on your progress on this site earlier; but I digress, I loved this little one-shot. I admit it, not only do I like Transformers' smut, but when it has tentacles of any kind, its twice as good. Not to mention Prime being dominated is such a kink of mine. Soundwave ... who knew such a stoic mech put so much worth on a concept such as virginity.

As always, thanks for sharing.
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok....that was an interesting take on xeno sex......me likey!!! me likey ALOT!!!!

got more?
~_^
person aniay
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers*

Nnnngh... that was... Oh Primus... *is speechless*

Darn.

*loves*
person Shi_koi
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*heart*

That was brilliant! I love the way you managed to capture Soundwave's character. --purrs-- Oh yes.

Oh and Optimus! --wide grin-- It never fails to amaze me how well you write these situations. Wow. Absolutely perfect.

*heart*
schedule July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Such an unusual pairing that I hope that maybe you would expand on the story. I think that would be brilliant.