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Hey I love the story so far. Can you please update it i want to read more. :)

Do me two favors, 1. stop rushing you have all the time in the world 2. Add the next chapter!!

You've got a really good thing going here and I hope you keep it up, I love the title and I'm interested to see where this is going so dont give up because you have some raw talent here that is working for you :-P

It's okay. Just one thing though, Freddy murdered the kids in the 1960s, not the 1980s.
And please don't make this into a romance story or endless smut, make it more horror related.

Wow! I like this story :)... she is a bit weid, she kinds recall me of Freddy himself! Instead Ashley is a real bastard..what a bad little witch...!

Okay your doing good so far I like that you kept the title true to the first few thats really nice. As to the story itself: The speed of the story is fine but you need to take your time when you are writing (I've made this mistake myself) because you leave lots of details out that you normally would have covered. I was told to re-read my work a few times before I put it up and that helped me but the thing that really helps is to have a friend read them before you post them because they will be able to spot errors or holes that you may over look becuase you know whats in your head, but that people like us need to have explained. (If you dont know any one to proof it for you I'd be more then happy to help and all your work is YOUR work I dont want it, I have enough of my own to keep my hands full lol)

Yea I gotta agree with Alice on this one, your doing good but you need a proof reader or if you feel comfortable doing it yourself that works to. I also would like to offer my proof reading ablites (however limited) to you as well.