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by DB2020

person Aquarakaiba
schedule July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and have been waiting for update...hope there is one soon XD
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so amazing. i just wanted to keep on reading more of it. very glad to read that you will not abadon the story and will post as able. thanks and keep up the good work. you have an awesome grasp on the characters by the way.
person mancer
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, when I read the description to your fic, I was dubious. Actually, no, I was expecting a car wreck with possible hilarity of terribleficness.

And then I finished the first chapter, and the second, without realizing I'd gone through it so quickly. Hell, I even queued it up on my phone 'cause I had errands to do today that I really needed to finish, and there was no way I was getting them done without little breaks here and there to read. Nearly picked it up while I was stuck in traffic too >_> I didn't, but was so tempted.

I adore the pacing of the plot. Your action scenes are spot on in every way (Excitement! Adventure! Tention! Will they make it?! Oh man!!!) and the way you're building up Their mutual feelings is so sweet and falling into place quite perfectly. I'm glad I've come upon your story with so much of it already up; I can see why it would take a while to craft it just right!! I can't wait to read more. I'm so curious to see if Spock is going to remember everything (and if it would be like these memories were "always a part" of him, thus personality shifts, or if he will remember them in a less linear fashion of "yesterday I was a preteen"), or if he's going to get some delicious conflict with his alternate younger self via all of those logs.

The other thing I was curious about, where is old Spock in all of this? I can't help but wonder what the original's opinion might be with all of these happenings.


Good luck on continued efforts on this! Highly anticipating future chapters!
person doodle penguin
schedule November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! You cant leave it here! Little Spock is soo adorable with his little crush! PLEASE!! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
must read more....please, please, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

really good story :)
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say again how much I love this story. Your writing is wonderful, and I really mean that. I can't wait to see what happens, so thank you for promising not to abandon it!
person BlackMetalHeart
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I think that you have done a great job and I will be eagerly awaiting your updates!
schedule September 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to check back on this story. Was very happy to have three new chapters to read!!! Still loving this amazing story and I'm very excited to see if Spock will change and if he does what the result will be! ^^
person Talltree-san
schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that adult Spock will make his comeback in the next chappie? And if so will his memory be still intact? It would be so funny for Spock to still remember and be embarrased of his actions toward Jim as a kid.
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this story so far and look forward to your return to it.