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July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this is... very, very very good. Really very good.
I deeply enjoy the characteristics of both autobot and human. It's simply fascinating how well you managed to write both sides, and how this budding relationship is growing. Of course, the mind boggles a bit at how the... ahem. "logistics" will work.
And I'm going to keep a very close eye out for more updates. :D
I deeply enjoy the characteristics of both autobot and human. It's simply fascinating how well you managed to write both sides, and how this budding relationship is growing. Of course, the mind boggles a bit at how the... ahem. "logistics" will work.
And I'm going to keep a very close eye out for more updates. :D
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lola honey!
I hate to leave one of those awful, "I love this! Please update soon!" reviews, but yeah... I do love this, and I REALLY want to read more. Please. :) I love these Transformer fics of yours. I'm glad you don't have Maggie getting it on with a hologram... the holograms always weird me out a little.
I really like how you expand the Autobots personalities and how you develop the plot so realistically... you'd have to really think it over before you jumped into bed with a giant robot... even if he is as sweet as Jazz.
Btw, I was totally surprised that her kiss landed on his spark. I should have seen it coming. Hot stuff. :)
Send me an email! It's snowing and I'm listening to your music. :)
Merry Christmas!
I hate to leave one of those awful, "I love this! Please update soon!" reviews, but yeah... I do love this, and I REALLY want to read more. Please. :) I love these Transformer fics of yours. I'm glad you don't have Maggie getting it on with a hologram... the holograms always weird me out a little.
I really like how you expand the Autobots personalities and how you develop the plot so realistically... you'd have to really think it over before you jumped into bed with a giant robot... even if he is as sweet as Jazz.
Btw, I was totally surprised that her kiss landed on his spark. I should have seen it coming. Hot stuff. :)
Send me an email! It's snowing and I'm listening to your music. :)
Merry Christmas!
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November 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please update soon!!! I love this fic!!! Maggie and Jazz are a good pairing! Please some sex into the chapters soon or the longing and want... I would like to see how Jazz deals with those feelings for Maggie. Robot porn with a human :D That's my dirty wish :D Please update soon :)
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love your stories, hope you get back around to adding another chapter to this one
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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! it is a great story and a sunday wash sounds like it would be a great chap
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that is the best way that could have come out! I will look forward to updates of this and check for it alot! *hits bookmark button*
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice new chapter!! I like the way you are building up their interactions and feelings!! I hope you update soon!
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I'm dieing to know what happens next. I'm going to go crazy, please update. Please, oh please, oh please update. I'm hooked, your an awesome author!
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Please update soon. Can't wait to see wear there relationship goes. Or how the can go over the boundaries of a different species relationship. UPDATE!!! PLEASE!
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good characterization, and good pacing. I'm enjoying this - please post more soon!