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for In the Brig

by PhoenixOaks

schedule October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Guhhh, so sweet. Well, combination of sweet and sexy. I love the tension in it, the obvious conflict and the strain added by the constant fear of getting caught. Also, for some reason it's immeasurably sexy that you have Miguel call Tulio "darling." 8D I dunno. Of pet names, that's one I quite like, and it sounds believable in context.

You can also really feel how hard it is on them not to be able to fall asleep together, for appearances sake, despite being trapped in the same confined, enclosed space. Poor guys. Anyway, nice work all around. I enjoyed myself. ^_^

~Moonstar