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for The Immortal Heart

by amandalee

person akasha
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yum..nothing like zeus getting raunchy to curl the toes. please update!!! I've been waiting patiently for almost a month now for an update! :-) pretty please?
person Jessica
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hera a bitch! Zeus really should treat Hades better! Great story
person CondemnedForLife
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I only got a chance to review now! I was so disappointed when I checked this and thought there was no update, but then I scrolled down a bit and saw it, so I was thrilled! Another fantastic chapter, but god(pun intended) I really want Hera to get whats coming to her. I'd also love for the others to witness Hades' awesome powers and maybe that will convince Zeus that he more than deserves to fight along side them. I was furious that even though he loves Hades, he still sees him as slightly worthless! Anyway keep up the great work and please update soon! :)
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter of complete awesomeness! That scene between the three gods had me especially hot under the collar! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon! :)
person CondemnedForLife
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one and to find out if Hades' extra body parts are still working! :)
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! You updated! I'm so, so happy!! I looked at this a few minutes ago, saw that there were two new chapters, giggled very childishly then happily read on! Two very great chapters by the way, they are finally at Crete, Demeter is healed and now I just hope Hera gets whats coming to her! :) Update soon!
person CondemnedForLife
schedule December 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this story is absolutely incredible! I only found it yesterday and had to read it from start to finish without stopping because I was so entralled! Your writing is amazing and literally flows off the pages. I read your other story as well and although I loved it, I cried for Hades at the end. I was so upset that after eerything he had been through he still didn't get any luck.
I really hope that the ending in The Immortal Heart is happier for Hades because he really deserves it. Two things I'm curious about however is 1: Was it Hera's poisoning of Hades that made the baby so disformed or was he like that already and 2: Would Hades still not have the womb inside him? I mean what would have happened to it after the birth, did it disappear or something? If it didn't it would be incredible if he could get pregnant again for Zeus.
I can't wait to see how Hades' powers develop and if Demeter will live. . . Update soon please!!
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hades finally healing!!!! And I loved how Hera got laughed at by Zeus that was quite funny. I can't wait for Hera to slip up and accidently give away her jealousy and her hateful nature.
person jaino
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so addicting. Thank you for updating so often... the suspense at the end of each chapter almost kills me, lol. I'm sad that the baby ended up that way but it's a good twist in the plot. I'm really happy this chapter ended on a nice note, can't wait for more!
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this chapter was really captivating! Zeus...well what can you say? He finally got his head out of his butt and helped Hades. Really I am not surprised that Hades tried to kill himself, the way you wrote his depression was so very real and heart breaking. And I love how Poisiden saved him that was truly brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter.