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for Dusk

by Bethster7

person Rebekah
schedule October 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I'm looking foward to more chapters, I love the version of how barbossa lost his leg. Please continue
person sugarxpeach
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is really amazing! Please please PLEASE continue writing it! The only thing I dislike about fanfiction is how it's always the really good stories that go unfinished. All the while all us fans wait with bated breath hoping to see what happens. Please don't forget this lovely story!
person Kerowyn
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You probably haven't updated this in a while and have moved on, but I would like to say that this is a fantastic plot line and I do hope you continue it :)
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really appreciate your writing. Thanks for this new slant on why/how Barbossa lost his leg and for how you included Elizabeth in the story. I hope you write more!
schedule June 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you won't wait too long before you update again.
I like when this story is taking place, very enjoyable so far.
Can't wait for more :)
person Suzanne
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Barbossabeth, so thank you so much for writing!

I can't wait for more!!!
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story und such a great pleasure to read. I’m enjoying the slow growing of that relationship. You perfectly catched Barbossa´s and Elizabeth´s character. I hardly notice time pass as I read it. Can't wait to see what happens next ! Thank you so much for that story !
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your story as well...gripping and emotional, exellent and fluently written !
I´m curious how the story developes further...please update soon !
person bonnyblondelass
schedule November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And so the situation begins to heat up! :) You continue to hold me in rapt attention here. BTW, in order to get italics, you type < and then the letter 'i', and then an ending like this > at the beginning of the letter. When you want to end it, type < and then /i and then >. If you want more info or even a beta, email me! I am loving your tale, and am envious that you seem better able to keep it flowing smoothly than I am with my current story.

Contact bonnyblonde (at) gmail.com.
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful chapter! I am SO loving this story. "A dismal sadness"...very poetic, very appropos of Barbossa himself, don't you think? This story is so compelling and so well written, truly beautiful. I can hardly wait for this relationship to bloom, you have crafted a story that has drawn me into that world and leaves me wanting more. :)

BBL