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by Chibioneesan

schedule January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
TOO SHORT WANT MORE... ITS LIKE ONE COOOKIEE
person jinx1764
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very cool, I liked it a lot!
person DarkRoze
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more! more! more! this is really good!!
person tory
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i really reallyyyy liked this story! id love it if you posted your other fics id love to read them.
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well hot damn, woman, that was pretty awesome! Just the right touch of sweetness and wistfulness, a good explanation for their situation that didn't go into the unbelievable or cheesy, and altogether just written out really well. I liked his transition from 'Jared' to 'Jareth' throughout the night, both in her understanding of him and in his physical appearance/their location. (Though I'm still trying to figure out whether he was doing that on purpose or just losing himself in her enough to lose control over his disguise. The romantic in me is going to vote for the latter.) Just wonderful babe ^_^