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by LadyKnightShade

schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Very hot! I've often thought their first time would be, not rushed but not languid either. A brisk deliberate pace. Very well done, great descriptions of the thoughts and emotions going on enhanced rather than slowed down the action. So glad I took the time to track this one down! Thanks for sharing, and please write more!
person jjohnson
schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Glad to see more Megamind fiction. =)

I also wanted to let you know that there is now a Movies > M > Megamind section and you should recategorize your story over there so that more people can find it and enjoy it.
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this story!!
FYI There is now a Movies > M > Megamind section. YOu should go re categorize your story under there :D
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM

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person Mist
schedule November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly excellent first chapter! I absolutely love your take on Roxie and how she feels about sex -- so very few people seem to think like this and I find it so refreshing to read a fic where the character actually decides to sleep with someone not only because their libido is telling them to.

Also love her thoughts about how Megamind treats her as an equal and doesn't push her. Seriously well done!
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Megamind totally would mispronounce lasagna! That's a great detail. Nice story, I really liked it :)
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More please! I finally found it last night (finally realized there's no category for Megamind yet on this site) and just re-read it. Would love more chapters, please.