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December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Great plot. Good use of details. I hope for more of this story and that
Gray-hair and gweyn (probably spelled the name wrong) get into a good relationship.
Keep up the good work.
Gray-hair and gweyn (probably spelled the name wrong) get into a good relationship.
Keep up the good work.
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March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this story!! I really hope you continue to write more chapters. I really want to know what happens between gray hair and yeyinde!!! Awesome story!!! PLEASE keep me posted and let me know when you post more chapters or maybe its up on another website.
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July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hate to be that guy but I thought that id let u know that the Smith&Waston M 500 is not the gun from dirty Harry and its not a 44. Maggnum. The S&W 500. Is chambered in the 500. Maggnum cartridge witch just as u said kicks like a fucking mule (definitely the way to go if you plan on settling a score with the fucking predetor) its mostly a big game hunnting cartridge but iv seen them put quarter inch holes in a half inch thick steel plate from 25 yards. The 44 mag. U mentioned from dirty Harry is the S&W Model 29. Sorry if I kind of sounded like a Dick but guns are something I known my hole life and since u seem so into the realism thing I thought Id let u know about the mistake again I'm sorry if I sounded like a Dick I love the stories and hope u haven't disscontinude it. (I really wanna see that tucking bad blood get his.)
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. let me know whenyou update, please.
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August 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I noticed you haven't updated in a little while... which is too bad, cuz this fic is shaping up to be a good one.
Next update, I'll be reading it faster than a facehugger on a human. lol
Love where you're going, really. Love the use of Yautja language, too.
Next update, I'll be reading it faster than a facehugger on a human. lol
Love where you're going, really. Love the use of Yautja language, too.
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! YOU! Where is the next update? Don't make me go all spanky on you.
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April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
pretty please be done with the next chapter please?!?!?!
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March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Kami, I really have to say I'm loving thisfic! the amount of detail and accuracy you achieve is fantastic. it's relistic, dramatic, funny at times and you paint such a clear picture that one can't help but be...cativated, sucked in by it. I really am dying to see where you go with this fic. it's better than some published books I've read.
XD
MN
XD
MN
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have the next chapter of One More out to my beta right now!
Where's your next chapter? I can't wait for more. I love the character dynamics, and that some qualities are universal (like men and booze, lol).
Crossing my fingers for smut, even if it's only almost smut. :D
Where's your next chapter? I can't wait for more. I love the character dynamics, and that some qualities are universal (like men and booze, lol).
Crossing my fingers for smut, even if it's only almost smut. :D
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
do i have to poke you again?
*sharpens author-poking stick*
*sharpens author-poking stick*