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for Survival of the Fittest

by DagdothFliesh

schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH! ps: best word in this chappie? 'wife-monster'. BAHAHAHA!

gonna start pacing now til you update. I hold you responsible for the groove in the floor. :P
person ginstar3
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It would be awesome if Ujik’va made some sort of translator or translator microbes (IE Farscape). Wow can you imagine waking up with your hand wrapped around an aliens cock? LOLz I can understand her mortification. And, I'm also wondering if Duke(?) saw Asshole rape her. Damaged goods? What a fucker. I'm glad she busted his nose. I love how gritty and raw this story is. The realism to me, is like catnip to a cat. Keep it up. Can't wait for the throw down with Asshole. I hope she puts a bullet right between his eyes. Please update soon.
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn!
loved!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YES! An update! *shakes my little tushie in your honour*
Things just dont go her way, do they? I wonder what it is like inside of the Titan, how the power systems are, whose alive, who isn't... Interesting addition to the mix!

I cannot believe she woke up sucking him off. O.o Admittedly, the dream, bath, and reality was a little hot... The heater must have turned on in here...

Anyway, before I rant on even more. Great work, Excited that you updated... I've like read everything Pred. on this site... so Its good to have more! *insert insane laugh here*

P.S. Duke is an ASS! He deserves to be shot by the Dirty Harry replica/model. Please don't kill the Doc, I like him! But if it is in the best interest of the story, by all means.

Good luck.
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
another classic work of art i can't wait for the next one
schedule January 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yes It is as I always say nice to come back to new chapters. You are still doing a good job with the grit. I like that the story flows smooth. I also like the near "pet" aspect frame of mind grey hair seems to have for our abused but still standing lead lady. I like more story than smut, you are coming across with the story and that gets an "A" in my book. keep up the good work, deep and dark you seem to have a knack for :) mmmmwwaaahh!
person Caz
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*poke*
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh you know you like a good poking hahaha
I quite literally squeed when I saw this had been updated.
Rawr what a dream. and I don't think he's OOC. He doesn't consider her hot or anything, it's the scent, and her toughness and mercy that draws him. And it's normal that he's holding back cause of the taboo of stuffing prey. LOL.
Can't wait to see what happens on the Titan, Asskickery abounds!

gonna reread and crash. bwah!
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no doubt! ^-^ Who in their right mind wouldn't love the dark side with all its perks! I mean just think about it you get free XXX rated entertainment so you know its the good stuff. Then as an added bonus when you join up they give you milk AND cookies. Now tell me who wouldn't join up for that!
Sooo can't wait for that next chap seriously just me knowing that your gonna turn up the heat in it has me wishing I had ESP so I would like instantly know exactly when you'd be posting it!
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still immensely enjoying this story so much. I loved this chapter and finally getting the POV of "Grey-Hair" and finding out where he's coming from. I was surprised to see her former crew-mates still alive, and finding out how one of them purposefully left her behind and she suffered because of it, what a bastard.

And yeah, still got the grit behind it, which is what I am loving. Can't wait to see where you will take things next.
-DGD