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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Impressive!
I'm surprised she hasn't kicked the bucket yet. That was two giant preddies cocks in her!... >.< And she's still MOVING!... She's a natural survivor!
Too bad she is unable to bare children... I wonder what is going to happen to her once she obtains her revenge. Kill the male Oomans!!!!! *insert evil laugh here*
I love it!
I'm surprised she hasn't kicked the bucket yet. That was two giant preddies cocks in her!... >.< And she's still MOVING!... She's a natural survivor!
Too bad she is unable to bare children... I wonder what is going to happen to her once she obtains her revenge. Kill the male Oomans!!!!! *insert evil laugh here*
I love it!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i honestly hope Gwyn gets to KILL duke before this is over, the jerkwad!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually think you did a great job with the first perspective and switching to 3rd with Grey-Hair. Not many can pull it off but you kept it flowing I think. Thank you for the update! I can not wait for the next chapter! This story is exciting and keeps me guessing!
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January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the update, and I love the predator pov. I'm a personal fan of 3rd person, usually, but to be honest, I didn't even notice the pov swap. I was too busy being engrossed in the story. My vote is for whichever makes updating faster. ;)
I think you're doing well. Great start and solid writing. Drool worthy. Looking forward to smut. :D
I think you're doing well. Great start and solid writing. Drool worthy. Looking forward to smut. :D
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely LOVE your story. Great drama, great smut, great job with the Yautja. Looking forward to more.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nickname for the badblood? how about Asshole. LOL. Ugh, i'd love to snap his neck. So far I'm liking Grey Hair. Keep it up, this story is visceral and groovy.
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, gritty indeed. This is quite a unique take on things and I really am enjoying it. I can't even begin to imagine where you'll take things from here, and that's a good thing. This whole story is truly intense, but that was a very intense scene at the end of the current chapter, poor girl is really enduring things. And yes, definitely not what I was expecting for her first introduction to the potential love interest, heh, I wonder how they'll reconcile that.
Looking forward to more.
-DGD
Looking forward to more.
-DGD
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December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cool, keep it up
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December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D well, I'm not too fond of the whole rape part of course haha but this seems to be turning into a really good, original story! Please please continue! I want to hear what happens. I hope you won't abandon this or anything. ^_^
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yikes!
poor gwyn!
loved it, though!
poor gwyn!
loved it, though!