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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the new chapter. You kept it real and I'm on the edge of my seat to see what happens
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, very original and i can't wait to see what happens next!Q!!
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December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
goood work darlin I didn't even knw there was an Adult 'Net till I saw the story you posted on the original 'Net' well I think its the original but any way you did good I can't wait to read the next chap.
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December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was disturbing and uncomfortable to read as a rape scene should be. Very creative use of male rape, btw - I can't wait to see how that issue pans out later. I think you're doing an excellent job with this story.
I hope the yautja kicks the crap out of the bad blood now that he's free!
I hope the yautja kicks the crap out of the bad blood now that he's free!
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Always nice to see quality writing added to the Predator section. :)
I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where this journey leads.
I really like the story so far. I can't wait to see where this journey leads.
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, how lovely to see a new, well-written fic on here. And one that contains some real nice nasties, too! What can I say, I do fancy N/C and such evils. Do continue writing, I demand a new chapter in say, fifteen minutes. Hohoho.
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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am at the edge of my seat! What happens next?! I once again love all the detail! I also like how you made it more toned down for fanfic.net, very considerate. I personally like nit-n-grit so I can read it here :). G's reactions are good. In the same situation I would prob act the same. It would be cool if you could find away to show the predators point of view at some point. Lol it is a great start regardless and I hope to see another chap soon!
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far
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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! I really hope you have another chappy ready to go a cliff hanger like that right out of the gate is cruel. Only way to make up for it is a rapid post of the next chapter.
I do really like this, it has a raw gritty feel I like.
I do really like this, it has a raw gritty feel I like.
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great start you have going here. What I really like is the detailed gritty realism of the exposition of the scene and how you are putting major emphasis on the brutal realities of space travel and how fragile everything really is up there. Add in a touch of humor (lol, ship named after not one but TWO ex-wives) and a very interesting setup (not to mention a character who is so far acting in a believable manner) and this is definitely a story I'm going to look out for.
-DGD
-DGD