rate_review Reviews

What a fantastic story. Really hope to see more!

I love this story. I love the way it works, with Ramona winning a battle and losing the war, being stuck in a place where no one can save her and the only person aware of what's befallen her is more interested in continuing to mess with her than in helping her, knowing that the world she's trapped in is a better revenge than she could come up with. I only hope this isn't the end of it; there's not enough Scott Pilgrim fic of this quality or caliber and this is truly strong writing. Excellent stuff.

man this really good keep it up.

god damn this is a great story!

Please, Please Update THIS!

Really like Kim in this. keep it up

Great story man! first of yours I read. Updated please.

this story is fucking great! Keep up the awesome work!

Have Roxy get caught by Kim, wanting the ninja as well

Just like in all your work, you have managed to change the source material slightly for your own ends, yet still make it fit in with the source itself, the plot seems feasible and is genuinely interesting. You also have a brilliant imagination (I'm wondering if the steaming is actually viable as a technique) and the action is descriptive. However I would like to see more of Knives (you just keep teasing!) and Roxie may be included in some form of sexfight with either Ramona or Kim for dominance. My once criticism covers all of your work, however this one in particular: all of your characters break far too easily, I'd like to see some more struggling and effort put in before they simply give in. Can't wait for the next chapter! xxx