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December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really quite well written
if you could reformat it to remove those question mark hexagons that'd be awesome
more content would also be great
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really well written story. The way things progressed were believable and the characters stayed true to themselves. I would like to see a second chapter or an extended version of this story where the two of them do more with each other.
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure what to think of this at first, but the little touch of Dark in Anakin really did it for me. A nice balance of tenderness and Dark Side, although I'd have gone a little darker myself.
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice little chapter. I don't think there's nearly enough between the two of them, so it's always nice to see more. I do hope you eventually continue this.
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is quite good, though personally, I'd enjoy longer, more graphic description. I'd really enjoy a second chapter detailing Anakin and Ahsoka's escapades over those two weeks.