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FINALLY!!!!! THEY FINALLY HAD SEX !!! I COULDN'T FUCKING TAKE THE BUILD UP ANYMORE !!!! THANKYOU !!!!!! GAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!

THis is kind of like torture.

TO find such an amazing story... to what muse gods do I need to beg for them to bring you back to finish this story?

I need to have this updated, hooked.

I really hope you didn't stop writing for this story. It's amazing and I love it! When I came across a story like this I was so excited. It has plot and some mature content, which is rare seeing such a perfectly balance combination. It's like finding large chuck of gold in a endless and deep river.

when will there be more? i love this story. it is the only thing i have been reading for days.

Very nice adaptation to this genre. I love how you have gone about this, the plot is so interesting with so many delicious twists and turns.

excellent story so far hoping for 'Nick' to get his ass kicked but i didn't like how you killed off sonia i thought she would but a good rival for akira but keep up the good work

O__O Are you serious???? wow So basically ....yeah wow

wow...keep going.

I knew it!!!!!!! I so bloody knew it!
That creates a bit more drama... What does 'Nick' want with Cross and Guan? If at all....'
Doesnt Guan want to mate with Cross.... I cannot remember... have to re-read... All I know is that they have a special link thus my sibling theory which you just confirmed!!!
Some serious shit just went down!!!! Dun dun dun... So cannot wait for the next chapter, and Cross's reaction when they tell her! *throws head back* MUhahahahahahahahaha... *cough* hahaha... ha. ha...

I want to know what 'Nick' wants with Cross.... its really getting to me... I'm probably going to spend an over nighter re-reading this.... expect large dark bags under my eyes with coffee cups and energy drinks all over the computer area...


I so love Vor'mekta... can I have him? While your at it throw in Halkrath!!!!

.......WHAT???!!!!! OMFG WOW!!! More more more please!!!