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by kheavSarah

person beliefinkakashi
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! LOVE IT!!!!!
Just letting you know I'm still with you. I'll stick it out to the end, there is no other choice... I've got to find out what happens. Hope they don't do anything to Big B... that would so not be cool...

Nicky... muhahahahah! I want her to say that to his face! So, I know they have a devious plan for Cross... If, and how are they going to pull it off?

Cannot wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH boy, dont tell me the General's big brother is really....his father? No, cant be...Im so curious about what everyone wants to do with Akira and who her grandfather wants her with......great job once again!!!!
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy..Guan and the General, what an epic battle that could be! Im just as interested to know what Nihkou’te will say to Edwin and Akira..hmmmmm
schedule August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AHH YESS!!! LOVE IT!! So glad the Emperor is dead...really interesting on no trophy could come from it! Really love the emotional breakthroughs Edwin is having with his brother and Cross.

OH YEAH!! Mating b/w Cross and Betanu....WOW!! Worth the long wait for them to be mated.

Great job once again...this story ROCKS!!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! An update!!!!
Regenerating hard meat! I like. Wonder who will make it a trophy?
Black rage... nice new development... could cause problems in the future... muhahahaha!
The elder's control has to be cut over Vor'metka.. Keeping him from doing his duty... that is a load of @#$@! Elder Bakuub (hope i spelled his name right)is awesome! He's a keeper, dont kill him off, Please!

I am extremely happy that your still working on this story! I would go insane if you just dropped it... But once its done, I would go insane because there would be nothing to read... hmmm... I guess i will have to worry about it when i get there...
anyway,
good luck
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great new Chapter. I was surprised that someone else used the Name Nrak'Ytara in their story. I come here everyday eager to see if you update, so when I see a new chapter I get really happy. ^_^
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good stuff from you as always
person Dark
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter as always! I'm actually curious on who she' ll eventually end up with...at the moment I'm kinda siding for the twins to have her, but then again Betanu would make an amazing mate
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. Im scared about this Emperor xenomorph and the possibilities of what can happen. Im also SUPER excited to hear Edwins tale and what exactly happened between him and his brother.

Nicely done
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaat?! OMG First, we know how Constantine was murdered, not killed by the Xenos, and now..Vor’mekta is THE BROTHER OF THE GENERAL AND KILLED CONSTANTINE???!!! Wow.....lost for words..seriously!!