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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great job once again. So great to get a little bit of Guan's back story. I wondered how Cross would react to him and Im glad she didnt have the same reaction she did to Betanu. It will be interesting to read how he responds to her and Guans little outing. Soo scared about the cadets and what theyre doing..its gonna be BAD. I still wonder what it is her grandfather wants from her exactly...
AWESOME JOB!!!
AWESOME JOB!!!
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May 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh oh! At last we know something of what Nihkou’te wants of Cross.. although why he would go through with it...Im still guessing. I suppose politics are involved?
I can't wait for Connor's rite of passage! and I thought Constantine was making some sort of comeback... Humm I wonder how that will go over Cross!!
By the way!! Thank you for updating!! You stopped for a long time and so I stopped checking all the time.... Keep up the good work!!
I can't wait for Connor's rite of passage! and I thought Constantine was making some sort of comeback... Humm I wonder how that will go over Cross!!
By the way!! Thank you for updating!! You stopped for a long time and so I stopped checking all the time.... Keep up the good work!!
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW...OMG..it just got CRAZY!! Her grandfather can pick her mate?! BOY OH BOY..and I wonder what the deal between her and Guan is in the feelings they automatically have with each other. Im surprised Betanu didnt tell her! So sad about her father and his mother, it really explains alot about how he is and how he is with her.
BRAVO!
BRAVO!
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April 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I am in love with this story. Is that even possible?
Keep up the great work! *hugs computer* Its torture waiting for the next chapter... >.<
good luck!
Keep up the great work! *hugs computer* Its torture waiting for the next chapter... >.<
good luck!
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April 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Daaaaamn....was not expecting that oh well makes for a great chapter things just got spiced up. Although, I do have one question, her hormones or whatever shouldn't they be affecting how she feels towards other yautja males I mean I understand Connor and the two Elders thats she is related to and then there was that little thing her and Betanu had a while back but how come the twins aren't getting any attention?
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story its just like a soap? opera its getting better and better not to mention all the twist and turns the story plot is taking . I cant wait for the next Chapters :)
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
no wonder the general hates the yuantja so freakin' much!
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is getting seriously DEEP. Its really cool to see the General actually has a heart and cares for his daughter..GREAT JOB
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I simply say that I loved it
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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
uh oh!