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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Amazing! It has been so long since I have read this! I love how this turned out! woot!
Looks like there is going to be some trouble for Big B! I wonder what is going to happen next. I hope her grandfather is not up to something horrible. I wonder if he is thinking of breeding her. O.o
Good luck!
Looks like there is going to be some trouble for Big B! I wonder what is going to happen next. I hope her grandfather is not up to something horrible. I wonder if he is thinking of breeding her. O.o
Good luck!
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! So glad u updated this! Ive been waiting with bated breath. I think youre doing a great job. I guess I personally am not cut out to be a Beta Reader cuz I dont see any problems.
Very excited to see what this arbitraitor will be up too, especially with connection to the General..
Very excited to see what this arbitraitor will be up too, especially with connection to the General..
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh, loved!
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is amazing!!! I am loving your writing style as well as your characters. I was sad about Constantine but now I just feel like he is going to thelrow a spaner in the works XP. Cross and Betanu just make me awww all o er the place... when I am not
laughing my lungs out. Keep up the outstanding work and I can't
wait for more.
Your new fan Kyradda.
laughing my lungs out. Keep up the outstanding work and I can't
wait for more.
Your new fan Kyradda.
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another nice chapter! I'd been waiting for it for a while now :) Poor Cross, getting all flustered, but she got her payback, didn't she? Hahaha. I hope you get more out soon :)
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Claps hands gleefully*
I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait. Update the story NOOOW, I wanna know whats gonna happen.... please!
I can't wait I can't wait I can't wait. Update the story NOOOW, I wanna know whats gonna happen.... please!
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! It's really enjoyable to read and I just love Connor. Of course the play of emotions between Cross and Betanu is wonderful as well. It was funny when Cross realized she's part Yautja. Hope to hear from you soon. Take care.
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woo-hoo!
go Betanu!
lol
go Betanu!
lol
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooo, Look at all excitment that has happened while i was away!
Their BACK!!! Poor Conor has the couch! o.O lol!
Big B's back!!! I'm glad that he still wants Cross, too bad he has too many hurdles to jump before he can have her, Oh what fun! I wonder what's going to happen to Lark and Hulk, I seem to grow Fond of all the Youtja males you create...
Well i cannot wait to find out what happens!
Good luck
Their BACK!!! Poor Conor has the couch! o.O lol!
Big B's back!!! I'm glad that he still wants Cross, too bad he has too many hurdles to jump before he can have her, Oh what fun! I wonder what's going to happen to Lark and Hulk, I seem to grow Fond of all the Youtja males you create...
Well i cannot wait to find out what happens!
Good luck
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please find a beta reader! I mean that in the nicest way possible. I like the story idea and would love to see what you come up with in the future. I think you have a great concept and an ability to piece together a story. BUT it's in a shabby state with the technical and style issues. Basic spelling and grammar are important.
Think of posting online as a first date. You want to put your best foot forward and let them discover your only human later, when they like you too much to care. :D
Think of posting online as a first date. You want to put your best foot forward and let them discover your only human later, when they like you too much to care. :D