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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo..very interesting ending..and I like chapters like this that are build-ups and fillers. Just wetting the appetite. Great job!
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
jajajajajaja Lar´ja and Halkrath was it? or maybe Hulk and Lurk? jajajajajajaa thats just Cross comming back to life! yes! Oh Betanu Betanu...you really will have your work cut out for you! And at last! I knew she HAD to be part Yaut´ya! great story! very original! I want to see Connor soon! so you better continue!
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm sad that Conner has to leave his mom, but excited that Betanu is his dad.
And I was like O_O, Cross is part yautja. I don't like the General though. I love the story and can't wait for more.
Will Betanu and Cross get together?
And I was like O_O, Cross is part yautja. I don't like the General though. I love the story and can't wait for more.
Will Betanu and Cross get together?
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so, i was right!
she is part of them, too!
she is part of them, too!
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
See, I told you I would like it!
You threw a few twists in here, I like it! I suspected that she must have had a least some Youtja blood in here, either by nature taking its course, or by bioengineering. I found it really fasinating! With every chapter i'm pulled in even more!
Its not all that surprising that Cross withdrew from everyone when Conor left... I hope she goes back to her old self soon, and that Kelly will be in it more often...
I was waiting for this update, I was like a vulture circling this fic, it felt like every second i pressed refreash, and no update, that is until today! XD
Good luck, I cannot wait for more!
You threw a few twists in here, I like it! I suspected that she must have had a least some Youtja blood in here, either by nature taking its course, or by bioengineering. I found it really fasinating! With every chapter i'm pulled in even more!
Its not all that surprising that Cross withdrew from everyone when Conor left... I hope she goes back to her old self soon, and that Kelly will be in it more often...
I was waiting for this update, I was like a vulture circling this fic, it felt like every second i pressed refreash, and no update, that is until today! XD
Good luck, I cannot wait for more!
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You know I love you right? XD
I'm loving where it going, though you mixed past tense with present tense and it got a bit confusing on some parts. Other than that, aaaahhh!!! You updated!!!!
I'm loving where it going, though you mixed past tense with present tense and it got a bit confusing on some parts. Other than that, aaaahhh!!! You updated!!!!
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Thank you so much for your constant updating. I really appreciate it. So interesting to hear the full story of her clan..kinda freaky that every female dies after birth. Somehow I get the feeling Cross might be an exception LOL...great job once again.
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY AND HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I JUST LOVE THIS AND PLEASE OH PLEASE HAVE CONNER(sp?) COME BACK PLLLLEEEEAAASSSSSEEE HE WAS THE CUTES LITTLE THING THAT I HAVE EVER READ SO PPPPPPLLLLLEEEEAAASSSSSEEEE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! ^^
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaw noooooo don't do that to Connor....it'd make a good story though
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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XO Whaaaaaaat? he's Betanu's son? Really?....oh this sho nuff got interesting