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by kheavSarah

schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!! It totally answered my first question...but now I have more! LOL! It's so sad she became the way she did from missing her boy. But this is going to be crazy!!! I cant wait to read more, and of course, what will happen when Betanu hears about it....come get ur woman LOL!

Great job once again!
person Rev
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOH SNAP!!! Ha! That explains all the jumbo that made no sense in the earilier chapters. I was just summing it all to, Meh, it their story they can do what they want.......hey! Betanu lied!! That bastard!!!
person beliefinkakashi
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Do what you have to with Constantine, then hurry back with the Big B!!! *It almost seems like I don't like the guy, which by-the-way, I do, just not with Cross. He's everything a NORMAL woman would want in a man, Heck, I would want, but for cross... Not so much...*
I really enjoyed this chapter! I nearly cried, the tears running down from my eyes don't count, I had somthing in it!
So, How are you going to do this, write out a bit of what happens in the three years, or just hop to it... ta da... 3 years later! either way, I bet i'm going to like it!
I cannot wait their return, or how you reintroduce Constantine...
I'm Addicted to this story!
Good luck!
person Rev
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
.........I despise/love you. At least it was more than last time, but grrrr to you!!! I cant wait till your next update!
schedule February 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Was I livin under a rock? Damn i can't believe I missed the update of this new chap glad ta see you keepin this baby goin i can't wait to learn how Connor turns out when he is grown
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I was wondering if there was going to be an introduction of chemistry between Cross and Betanu and you certainly lived up to my expectations!! I cant wait to read more!!!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hate that they're being torn apart, but Connor NEEDS to go. And Ill actually say thank you for no complete sex between them yet. The anticipation is awesome. Now Im SUPER DUPER curious about the General and Cross..are the REALLY 100% human? Curiosity is killing me, but I am so excited! Great job once again!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i DESPISE her father!
he is such a cold hearted bastard!
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
who knew that 4 days without internet could cause a reading binge?

BTW.....awesome chapters love!!
person Eamon280
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite amazing right now, Ive added it to my favorites and definitely await what will happen with Betanu and Connor, amazing story so far, can't wait for more