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ooooh, is Cross maybe part Yauntja?

Ooooooh......you suck! =P That was such a tease!

Oh my! So theres the reason behing the Big B's appearance on the planet. Poor Conor? *wipes tears from eyes* Poor little guy. He is very courageious though, standing up to Big B like that!
Wonder if they are going to work out a deal pertaining to Conor and if he can visit or what not...

So, FINALLY, the attraction to the big Youtja happened! Yay! wonder how that is going to turn out! (wiggles eyebrows* Who needs Constantine when you've got Big B there! really... I know it sounds insensitive, especially when she just lost him. This is a story about Cross and hopefully a Youtja... right? ;3

Fantastic read!
Good luck!

I love how you update quickly!!! Still wondering about Constantine, but I can't help it if I find that little bit of Xeno exiting!!!The General would have a field day with that one!! A Yaut'ya grandson and a Yaut'ya sortof son-in-law?? hahahah great!!!! How will Connor be received by others? and again... keep it comming!!

Hahaha, deleting reviews that are trying to point out where you need improvement? That's why you'll always produce sub-par writing, but you'll think that you are the best writer on Earth. Good fucking luck with that.

Great story!!!! Can't stop reading! I love how you give details and your doing great at keeping my attention.

whaaaaa???? his son?!?!? he wants him NOW? I´d be pissed off to be sure! Looved how the story´s going!!! hehe will Cross end up on the Yaut`ya planet? By the way is the General fully human? He just seems so strong... More chapters please!!!

holy hell!
i was not seeing that coming, not at all!

Ok, I lied. I couldnt keep away long enough for you to update two chapters. Duuude, if I was Cross I would been like, so what if he your son, why the flip was he left in the middle of the woods?! Screw you! =D I feel mean saying this but I hope Constantine is dead so Cross can get with Betanu and make babies....or just practice making babies if they cant make em together. XD

Ooooo and the plot thickens!! Im really into this story and really enjoy what youre doing with it. I love the relationship between Cross and her son, and that natural meternal instincts and that bond of mother and son can cross even species. Keep up the great work!