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by kheavSarah

schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, I am soo loving this so far!!!
person beliefinkakaskhi
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You update faster than I can review, which is awesome!
I love the explination of Conor's abilities! Mother/Son bonding, I never would have thought of that.
I cannot believe the General let him go, but as you pointed out, His daughter means more to him than anything. Also, I cannot believe that the 8ft tall super tank even acknowlaged the little Youtja misfit. Can I call him the Big B... Can't spell his name at the moment? O.o I like the Big B so far! What happened to Constantine? He DISAPEARED! You said you had a plan for him, I wonder what it is... death by Xeno, explosion, jealiously?

I am glued to this fic, so keep up the good work.
Good luck!
schedule February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story.
I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the great work ^_^
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh, rawr!
love it!
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I feel bad for what happened to Conner. I look forward to reading more of this story ^_^
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
eeeps!!!!!
i was so worried!
but what if conner and betanu see each other somehow?
will they fight? what?
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY Conner! Show the General your not to little to kick his arse!! I hope his mom will be okay.
I love the story!
person Rev
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I didnt know I could review on this website. Oh well learn something new everyday. XD
I am loving this story!! It rocking my socks! =P I really really cant wait till the next chap, but a warning, I may not read it until you update the chap after next because the wait is killing and it so much more awesome to read it like a book. I love this story. XD
person beliefinkakashi
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That is one possessive kid. Not that i really blame him.
Wow, her world is fucked up. I wonder what is going to happen to them...
Wouldn't want to be in her shoes.
Good luck.
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious to see how this is gonna go

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