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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should do one with Leia and Jaina getting together.
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quite an Excellent story. You work hard to work in some great characterization in each piece while also writing excellent smut. If I could make one recommendation, it might be nice to throw in human male action into the story {Ex: Anakin/Ahsoka, Obi-wan/Bariss (Obviously, not necessarily these two, but those are four well-known characters so I'm using them as an example)}.
While the alien characters do throw in a nice spice of variety, I think that more people (myself included) like Star Wars for its human/alien interactions. You'd probably get quite a few more hits and reviews that way. But that's just a recommendation, please write whatever you want to! I am looking forward to the next chapter very much.
While the alien characters do throw in a nice spice of variety, I think that more people (myself included) like Star Wars for its human/alien interactions. You'd probably get quite a few more hits and reviews that way. But that's just a recommendation, please write whatever you want to! I am looking forward to the next chapter very much.
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of these master/apprentice type situations. That and the fact I have an impregnation fetish got a big hard response out of me. Keep it up, your story has good potential.