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I caught part of this on another site, and I'm so pleased to find it here! So sexy, and I love these missing lustful moments from "Fallen." You write so beautifully, and Aala is wonderfully drawn. I look forward to reading more from you in the future! Great work.

Beautifully written. There is a great deal of charm between these two characters and the caring relationship you have established between them.

This story was so much fun to read because of all the small details that you put in... describing the fit of Obi Wan's leather pants vs. how he looks in the robes, the black underwear, all the little sights and sounds that you describe in such great detail... the way you describe the lights and colors of the Coruscant skyline. The story just absolutely comes alive and makes it very entertaining and enjoyable to read.

Love the ending where Obi Wan brings his arms down around her. Perfect ending! Very in-character for Obi Wan, too! Wonder what he does when he gets to play with handcuffs?

Love Obi's perspective throughout this; his feelings for her are perfectly evident, and a joy to read. He *wants* her, but also wants her to enjoy herself. :) I love that she offers him a haven of a sort, a place where he can just "be."

Wonderful addition to this series! :D

I liked both stories! good job!

I just love this one; it's so wonderful how they take cues from each other, and how Obi as to fight his own "masculine urges." A quickie, but a goodie. (Okay, that was silly. :P)

Love!