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1. WWWOOOOTTT!!! more then one chapter!!!
2. I dont have time to read it all right now so I've saved this and will be reading it today... I'll come back and tell you what I think latter tonight I'm sure I'll love it though.
3. why does it from chapter 25 to chapter 27? lol

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I'm back.... I'm not sure about the ending, at this point the only thing I see is that we dont honestly know if he killed her... I get killing Gob to make them even, and I get her telling him to kill her. I even get why he'd want to... but something in that just doesnt fit to me... and my mind keeps comming back to the part where he tells her to say good bye to the past. It would seem to me (and please dont get upset with me) that he killing Gob and making them even was pretty much left one sting to the past, that being her parents. Cause at some point either he'd figuar out or she would that it wasnt HER choice, and that it was really her parents that killed their first son and that for both of them to get revenge for their child she wanted/needed him with her. So that he wouldnt feel deprived of the satisfaction of killing the people actually responceable for it. Cause seriously what kind of parent puts their child out and orders a forced abortion? I'd be willing to kill anyone that did that to me, and I cant think of a singel woman that would forgive that.
In any event its your story and I loook forward to see where its going, that is if you keep it going.

Still good, I'm still more into the "presnt" half of the story but I want to see if I'm correct about her "illness" but idk it seems a little to soon for all day nausah... GIVE THAT GIRL SOME PHINIGRAN!! (nope I cant spell but phinigran is used to settle really up set stomics)

Love this story.

GGGAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! I feel like going Joker on you to get the rest of this!!! ((Yes thats a good thing...))

I know you got a patteren and I'm not trying to make you feel rushed but I really cant wait til the next chapter this is really good. I enjoy the "presnet" chapters the most but I'm also glad to have the older ones for back ground information.

eee!! So close.... so close.... almost there.... cant wait for more!!

Wow! Great story! Can't wait to see how it unfolds. But take your time. Don't end it so soon!

Yes I'm interested!!! I LOVE this story so far, I have no words to discribe my feelings for it... of course at one point I had to litterally burst out laughing because back in one of the "1994" chapters (the one with the cabbie I think) in my mind I saw Heath Leger from when he was in 10 things I hate about you. My mind suddenly filled in ALL the '94 chapters with that image as Jack... I will admit I litterally fell off my couch laughing.

Amy way I am really really REALLY into this story now, I'll be a bit sad to see it in but on the other had this waiting for the end is super annoying!