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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! More soon!
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September 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It’s been awhile since I’ve checked on this story for new chapter updates, but I’m glad I did today! You have added many outstanding chapters that enhance the story so much. I’m very glad that you didn’t make the sex act just another common brutal rape scene, (even though Margaux was unwilling…) you gave Margaux her own pleasure as well, making the scene that much more enjoyable and passionate. Rape/sex scenes can be very difficult to write, but you seem to script them very well, and effortlessly. Great Job! More soon?
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April 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I actually saw Firewall last night on TV. I can see some similarities between the movie and your story but at the same time you made it your own.
Bye the way, I don't think you need to rewrite anything. It's great the way it is.
Bye the way, I don't think you need to rewrite anything. It's great the way it is.
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December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I was not expecting that! Thank you so very much for creating your own version of the Bill character, one that actually has some compassion. (which I would have love to see in the movie!) You are just continuously impressing me with every update you post. =]
Update! Update! Update!
Update! Update! Update!
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December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! The wait was so worth it.
I absolutely love it that you have made Bills character start to have (as it seems) romantic feelings towards Margaux, and that’s why he gets aggravated when she moves away from him. Again, you are an amazing writer. I’m in love with the plot of this story so far. I haven’t read a lot of very well written “hostage” stories on line. Aside from your, of course =)
Keep the wonderful updates coming!
I absolutely love it that you have made Bills character start to have (as it seems) romantic feelings towards Margaux, and that’s why he gets aggravated when she moves away from him. Again, you are an amazing writer. I’m in love with the plot of this story so far. I haven’t read a lot of very well written “hostage” stories on line. Aside from your, of course =)
Keep the wonderful updates coming!
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November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic updates! Robert and Bill have an exceedingly odd relationship, and it seems Margaux likes it when psychopaths lick blood from her fingertips. =P
Update soon!
Update soon!
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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once again you have left me wanting more! I’m getting some Stockholm Syndrome vibes from Margaux’s character. More towards Bill then Robert, of course.
More as soon as you can! =)
More as soon as you can! =)
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You do this every time....I get addicted and there's nothing left to read!
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October 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous! You have such a talent for capturing every characters emotions perfectly.
I really thought that Bill was changing for the better, but when he whipped Margaux with his belt it proves that he is still a crazy mother fucker! lol
And Robert seems very unpredictable, like he might rape Margaux at any moment or even turn on Bill!
I need more updates. Now. This story is just to addictive for you to make me wait even one day for an update! =)
I really thought that Bill was changing for the better, but when he whipped Margaux with his belt it proves that he is still a crazy mother fucker! lol
And Robert seems very unpredictable, like he might rape Margaux at any moment or even turn on Bill!
I need more updates. Now. This story is just to addictive for you to make me wait even one day for an update! =)
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October 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Once again, marvelously done. And I'm wanting more! I shall check back anxiously for updates!