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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Your story is incredible! You’ve captured Bill’s persona exactly as it is in the movie (which was amazing and is by far my favourite Paul Bettany performance). The way you have written it makes you want to just keep reading and reading. And I love it how you haven’t given anything away about a possible love connect or not. Please update soon. =]
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October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am totally enthralled by this story! I have to know what happens next! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!
And I promise I will give you a more productive critique once I read the whole thing; I give better comments on a whole piece basis.
Also, I didn't see the revised version. Where would I find it?
And I promise I will give you a more productive critique once I read the whole thing; I give better comments on a whole piece basis.
Also, I didn't see the revised version. Where would I find it?
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
These last two chapters were so great; I absolutely love how you've written Bill in how he can be so utterly charming one moment and the next be a total prick. It was also really great to see that you had updated by two chapters so there was lots to read. :) Really looking forward to what happens next, keep up the good work!
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June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg thank you thank you THANK YOU! I have been looking for a well-written Bill-centered story FOREVER and I just found your story and I loved every single moment of it! Your writing flows so well and you have Bill so perfectly in character. Please continue soon, I'm dying to read more!