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Please write another chapter!!!! PLEASE!
I love your Story.
It´s amazing how you work the movies and your Story line together.
The Vulcans are also ... cute? simple incredible how they aren´t only emotionless robotor but act so friendly towards the children and Jim. Now only Spock need to get his head said right and understand that acting captain kirk is his Jim.
And Uhura is a bitch! I hope Jims secret doesn´t find a bad end ...

So you HAVE to write another chapter!

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Please please pleasssseeee will you continue this story?
Its amazing and beautiful and just so brilliant i think im going to die if it wont be finished :(
So pleaaaasssee finish it?

I really love this story, i'm pretty sure i've read it before, so i appologise if i've already requested that you send me an email when you update, but i'd greatly appreciate it :) My email is charlie-becks@manx.net Thanks if you do :) Really a great story and i can't wait for Spock to find out he has a son :)

Please update! I love this fic. It's very enthralling, I was totally hook. This is my first S.T. fic and I'm happy that I decided to read this.

Excellent work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

*tapping my foot impatiently* Okay...finish the story. Now would be great. LOL Not many people can get me all pushy to hurry it the heck up, but you did.

I'm in love w/ this fic. It keep me on the edge of my sit. At least Jim told Sarek. So, he knew the entire time that Jim & spock were having sexual relations. I wonder why he didn't say anything?

Okay, I've said this from this time I saw the movie: can't stand Uhura then & I can't her in this fanfiction. I felt really bad for Jim, after him watching that kiss, but that's ok... Spock IS going to find out his Jim & Kirk are the same person & that they have a child together. Hopefully, they will find out about why their mail has been intercepted.

Excellent work! Can't wait for the chapter. Please update soon!

ArchNemesis ^_~

ps. if you have a mailing list please add me: shinigami_godeath@yahoo.com

Woot! an update love seeing those ^_^ i cant wait to see what happens next got sad when it got to the end of chp 4 and there was no other chapter so i cant wait. also love how long they are. Cant wait to see another update so excited!

cant wait to see what happens its so cool to see a sequel ^_^ update soon!

This is soooooo good! I cannot wait for another update. I want to know what Spock will think of his little elfling :p

Moar... I need more updates! Lets get past the movie bit and the barbs being traded back and forth and get to the plot. This needs more Spirk!