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for Within Dreams - COMPLETE

by jinx1764

schedule June 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
An amazing story!  I've just spend an entire evening reading the whole thing from start to finish.  Thank you!
person LwoD
schedule February 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Amazing talent you've got here. Very entertaining. 🌠
person Nonnix
schedule February 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I can believe that GS is death I almost cry in that chapter and I can't stop reading it. I love the story
person Blue
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, but the amount of "bloody hell" and "bloody this and that" is making it hard to stay focused. Gerard says it multiple times in every chapter. It is maddening. But like I said, I like the spey and the rest of the story is well written. Just trying to hard to be British and in doing so made Gerard annoying.
schedule November 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Thank you for sharing it.
person cynfulme
schedule June 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! So many threads you could use to continue on with this story...follow up with Cassie, Toby, Todd's girls, even Jacen!
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh this was such a wonderful story. I'm very fond of it. Thank you so much for sharing your work with us
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story, it's so beautiful, got so absorbed read it all in 3 hours. Blessings!
person amanda
schedule April 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well written. One of the best stories I've read in a while... Except I didn't understanfd why chapter thirty was only an authors note. I was saddened to go from them discovering each other (as finally mutuallly in love) and him finding out he's a father to every body in the underground... I was slightly confused...
person amanda
schedule April 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say that I only just finished chapter 15 and so far I'm loving it. I used to watch this movie all the time and now to read an excellent fanfic. *muah* I love ya. Lol any whoo... In chapter 15 when they are talking about her mother and when she finally matures a little you meant to say fifteenth. But in the story it says fiftieth. That's one of the first typos I've noticed. :) now on with the rest of the story. Oh and might I say you are excellent at writing hot passionate sex scenes.