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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite human/mech pairings and I am not sure why. I really like how this is starting out, the insight you are giving into their thoughts and their characters is wonderful. I also like that it is clearly going to be a slow build, not something that is going to happen instantly. The humor is also great, I was laughing through different parts.
I really hope you continue this.
I really hope you continue this.
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October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing this while on my phone otherwise I would definitely be logged in and giving you the longer review that you deserve.
This first chapter was awesome. There are bits of humor here and there while at the same time there is enough information for the background of this fic as well as an amazing lead in for things to come. It's flowing really nicely right now. Keep up the awesome work; looking forward to reading more~
This first chapter was awesome. There are bits of humor here and there while at the same time there is enough information for the background of this fic as well as an amazing lead in for things to come. It's flowing really nicely right now. Keep up the awesome work; looking forward to reading more~