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December 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. :) love the pun in the title. The ending was a great laugh though. Snickering to the end.
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
freaking awesome and I don't know how but you managed to keep them perfectly in character!
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November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow things got a bit heated here
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sweet it wasn't rushed like most of the fanfics i read on this site but just right I can't wait for things to heat up
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November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woah....well he sure told him
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November 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
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October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More personal than I expected - when it comes to describing the characters, their speech patterns and feelings - and that's definitely a good thing. Promising work so far. :)
~Moonstar
~Moonstar