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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Stonewall taking control!
Awesome. I love Crest's deadpan at the beginning with the inquiry to Stonewall as to what he was going to do to fill his time *snicker* Crest is such a card!
The scene with the Arc trooper though, has to be my favorite because it's a precursor to Stonewall asserting himself with his woman; he can't step in without blowing their cover which must be agonizing and you portrayed his frustration very well.
I like how that scene was from his POV instead of Kali's.
The jealousy thing was hilarious but spot on; sometimes a little does does wonders for the libido *grin* I love how he used it as a point of control, taking her to the brink but remaining in command of himself. He's obviously learned a lot under Kali's *ahem* diligent teachings *smirk*
I loved seeing him take control though; it's one of those "I've been waiting for it" moments between these two. I knew it was coming eventually - it had to with just how comfortable they are with one another - and I wasn't disappointed. Loved it!
They're do damn hot - smokin' even! - together!
Awesome. I love Crest's deadpan at the beginning with the inquiry to Stonewall as to what he was going to do to fill his time *snicker* Crest is such a card!
The scene with the Arc trooper though, has to be my favorite because it's a precursor to Stonewall asserting himself with his woman; he can't step in without blowing their cover which must be agonizing and you portrayed his frustration very well.
I like how that scene was from his POV instead of Kali's.
The jealousy thing was hilarious but spot on; sometimes a little does does wonders for the libido *grin* I love how he used it as a point of control, taking her to the brink but remaining in command of himself. He's obviously learned a lot under Kali's *ahem* diligent teachings *smirk*
I loved seeing him take control though; it's one of those "I've been waiting for it" moments between these two. I knew it was coming eventually - it had to with just how comfortable they are with one another - and I wasn't disappointed. Loved it!
They're do damn hot - smokin' even! - together!
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December 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you have more hidden on this websight .... kinky girl.
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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the relationship between Kali and Stone - I've been reading my way through the rest of your SW fics over on fanfiction.net, and I love them all! Great job with the characterization, and your emotional points are really well done. It's frustrating to me that you don't have more reviews on these! Keep up the good work