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for Breaking the Code

by rabbitwriter

person Akiima
schedule March 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was superb. Very well characterized.
person RyuaAlba
schedule February 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I liked this. I really, REALLY liked this. It was really well written. It's one of my favourite scenarios, the Clone and his Jedi, and you've written it very nicely.
person laloga13
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Total damnation." Love, love, love. Also: “You act like I’m going to bite you.” That's coming later, I hope. :P

Love the story so far, love the characters. Kian's wry and charming; Korbin is shy and adorable, and I can't wait to see what happens next. More please!
person laloga13
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
More please! :D Love these guys...
person laloga13
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful buildup! I love these guys together, and look forward to seeing them in action. And yes, I mean that exactly how it sounds.

“My professional opinion is, you’re not getting naked fast enough.” Love this!