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February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great beginnning. You've set up the imminent intrigue perfectly! And, as I said elsewhere, I really like your characterisation of Jareth - very true to form. Incidentally, nice to see Hoggle again too.
I hope you'll continue this, even if the muse for it has left you alone for a while.
I hope you'll continue this, even if the muse for it has left you alone for a while.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like it already. (: Great characterisation (:
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
And this is why it's good to be the king... no one picks on you for the size of your wardrobe!
Let's just see how Constance deals with masquerades and mysteries... :D
Let's just see how Constance deals with masquerades and mysteries... :D
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July 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a wonderful start, and I have to say, I love the way Constance reacts, and how she admonishes herself. The gods know, I've doen that often enough myself, and it really makes her come alive as a person, and not just a static character.
I'll be looking forward to more!
I'll be looking forward to more!
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A very nice start, Arkaad! Very clearly written, I didn't even have to imagine much as it made pictures as I read! I would be interested in seeing the next chapter soon!