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for Paradise Midnight

by serendip

person laloga13
schedule January 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy sigh. PM never gets old...I love this ficlet, love reading these two. :D [hearts] Kali and Stone make me so happy, and I'm glad that you wrote this! Wonderful job with this; you write them so well. :D
person laloga13
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! It let me review again!

Needed a bit of happy, smexy fluff...this hit the proverbial spot. I'm so grateful that you wrote this! It means the world to me. :)

Love it, just love!
person laloga13
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Perfect, absolutely perfect. Sweet, romantic, and "scorching hot," (loved that line!), you captured my characters with grace and...did I say perfection? Yes? Well, it holds true.

*"Hold that thought," he grinned.* *Such* a Stonewall line - love, just love! I don't care what you say, you've got a great handle on him, and I could picture him so perfectly, here. Kali, too, is beautifully portrayed, and her "sparkling eyes" reminded me of "Awakening." :D

I love that this could fit into either timeline, and all the details that you've captured in Kali's braid, Stone's scar and even the copious birdsong of Mundali, but more than that was the sheer, overwhelming love and affection between these two, which you - forgive the pun - nailed. It's wonderful to read, and gives me a fresh perspective on my own characters, which is something I treasure more than I can really express.

After a crap day, this was beyond a wonderful surprise, and I'm so happy that they "bothered" you enough to write this! Thank you for this piece of loveliness! :D