Oohhh !!! Is there going to be any more to this?? It's been left on a cliffhanger and I'm hooked lol ...
Oh man!! A cliffhanger!! Absolutely loved it .... but what about Sarah and Jareth?? Do they finally get to be together?? Is Sarah saved properly?? This is FANTASTIC!! 💖💖
OH. MY. GOD! This story is absolutely WONDERFUL!! Will there be more soon???
I want to leave a review but I am not sure I have words for what I feel at this moment. To let you know that I have enjoyed your story and I would love if you continue.
Thank you!
Trinity
I've sat and read your story waited patiently to see Sarah saved... only to find it hasn't been written yet... my heart breaks and you have a quiet a talent for writing him. To that end I'm glad life is turning around for you! Continue your story please I look forward to your next installment!
Trinity
I'm a big lover of Labyrinth fan fiction so it's great to see you continuing with this. A very different take on it and I am keen to see where it goes. My only criticism would be how Jareth refers to Toby as 'my boy' so often. Find it a little distracting but maybe that's just me. The relationship between the two of them is so sweet. Hope we see more soon.
Such a great story! Please continue!
Oh god I read to the final chapter only to fins it is incomplete and there has been no updates since 2014. How can I get over such pain? I love this story please please come back and finish it or tell me where I can find the finished chapters. You shape Jareth in a new light that I find super refreshing and I feel so sorry for the characters of Sarah and Toby. Amazing job and I hope you find the time to finish it soon.