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for Oh, Now Why the Concern?

by jinx1764

person Sinner's Shadow
schedule April 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love the drama. The plot twists are unexpected and make the characters take on a life of their own. I sure hope you havent stopped writing for it.
person Hotforteacher3
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!! That's one motherfucker of a cliffhanger! PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME LIKE THIS!!!!
person NSarahK
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
>_< please don't stop writtening this story it's getting sooooo good ps Chpt 18 "after this, therefore because of this", right? But, to know what that means for the chapter hmmmm.
schedule June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lol oh I love this story, but what an evil little cliffie
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is my very favorite Labyrinth fic on this site. I'll now never be able to refer to Chuck E. Cheese as anything other than "Charles of the Cheese." LMAO.
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for Sarah's parents. :-( And I feel sorry for Sarah. It must be very hard to take care of everything withouth any help.
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jareth! Can't help but imagine David Bowie in the situation whom I adore, of course. :-)
schedule May 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I hope that the next chapter will come very soon, as things are warming up... :-)
schedule May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi, the start is very interesting. I wonder where it goes...
person R. Holtz
schedule May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I've read several of your other Labyrinth fics and while I really enjoyed Falling, this is my new favorite. I love how you have incorporated Toby as an essential part of this story instead of him being just a background character who is hardly mentioned. I really love that this is not only about Jareth winning Sarah over...but winning over her brother as well, while the three of them come to form a family. A very sweet and charming read. I eagerly look forward to more.