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November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing beginning with hints of danger and possible confrontation! I'd like to know more of Sarah's life Aboveground, her "workweek"; will you show how exactly Jareth manages to manipulate the time? Jareth's plans to marry her are also very interesting; how did the two become lovers? Why did Sarah decide to return and be with the King?
I really like their relationship, trust, respect and awareness of some boundaries not to be interered with. Really adult way to form a relationship.
Hope you'll tie it all in the next chapters. Good luck with your writing.
I really like their relationship, trust, respect and awareness of some boundaries not to be interered with. Really adult way to form a relationship.
Hope you'll tie it all in the next chapters. Good luck with your writing.
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November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd drop a quick comment to let you know that yes, I am reading these, and yes, I am enjoying it very much, and really, the only problem I have with these stories is the length of time it takes you to post a new chapter. Just thought you'd want to know ;)
I'm very interested to find out what Suggur has to tell Jareth, and why young ears can't hear it. Should be good!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase don't keep me waiting long!
I'm very interested to find out what Suggur has to tell Jareth, and why young ears can't hear it. Should be good!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaase don't keep me waiting long!