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August 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next update!
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August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woo-hoo! Cannot wait for the next chapter! *Super excited*
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August 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I'm getting super excited.
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August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You don't need to thank me for getting this story going agin silly already told ya but anyway I'm liking and I think you are doing fine without a beta. Little mistakes ain't that big of a deal so keep going! I have a feeling Riddick will be making an appearance soon and I can't wait! And yes I love Sasha our characters do kind of have something in common. :)
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August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please write more I'm loving your story
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story
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August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
nice story so far keep going. you do have some spelling errors though.
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August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why have you stopped hun? Keep going! :)
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January 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just because you haven't received any reviews til now doesn't mean that your story isn't off to a promissing start.
First, a word of advice, the mods do not look kindly on an author's note as a chapter. They don't mind if you have it at the beginning or the end of a chapter but as the only contents of a chapter they do.
Second, I haven't seen any terribly bad errors other than a few spelling mistakes and the like. If you you would like to try a beta look me up on the forum side under Arkaad_V there as well.
First, a word of advice, the mods do not look kindly on an author's note as a chapter. They don't mind if you have it at the beginning or the end of a chapter but as the only contents of a chapter they do.
Second, I haven't seen any terribly bad errors other than a few spelling mistakes and the like. If you you would like to try a beta look me up on the forum side under Arkaad_V there as well.