rate_review Reviews

Oh my god!!!!!!! I have read all 29 fucking chapters...And now that's it! You have to continue! You must. It's so amazing...You are an amazing writer and I must know the end!!! Please for the love of everything in the goddamned world...Continue!!!❤️

I absolutely love this story just wish there were more frequent updates.

I've seen speeling mistakes here and there but my biggest issue is the three hour shower in an apartment complex that still had hot steaming water. THAT alone irritated me lol. I tried I really tried to reason that maybe she had just been in there for ages prior to actually showering. But the flow seemed to be my original assumption.

So I usually just read, I'm not much of a reviewer but I had to stop and write something. love this story!! Your characters are great your rendition of Adam and Eve are spot on and I just overall love this. I don't know how Dani does it, I don't know how I would take it ... Knowing Adam is in another room with his wife and just ugh... It's not jealousy, but like a strange feeling. am I the only one that feels that way? Kudos on everything and I can't wait for more!

I am LOVING this fic!! I can't wait for more!! :)

I'm usually the type who just reads, but I feel the need to let you know how beautiful your story is. As much as I love Adam & Dani (and they fit so well too), I can only hope Eve will have a bigger role in their relationship. I cannot wait for the next chapter (please tell me they'll go after her) and I hope you wont abandon your story.
- Love, A

Awesome...fun,entertaining!