rate_review Reviews

Really liking this story so far! Please continue soon! 

Pretty sexy, well written. Hope to see more. Stay with the dominance submission angle.

When will the next chapter be out? Or do you not plan on continuing?

This is a pretty fantastic story. Do you intend to continue it? It's been over a month with no updates, and I am eager to see it continue.

This is a great story please keep up the good work. At some point I would love for Oola to get pregnant. Pregnant characters are a bit of a turn on for me. Would love to see it. Thanks for your time. Ylu should be able to email if you need more ideas.

I like the bit of backstory of Oola's life while in Jabba's palace. That everything she had went through was that of a typical slave girl for a notorious gangster. She may still be a slave but at least she won't be just used for entertainment. I can see her new master teaching her some new skills and making her self-sufficient to the point where she could be more than what she is now. He's already got plans for her and I can see the new collar for Oola being of a more fashionable design. Wonder where and when he'll get something like that and if she'll be with him on any bounty missions. Not only that, what exactly else will her new master teach her. Still, an awesome update to a different take in the Star Wars universe. Frankly I'm glad you're not using the main characters but creating something new with side characters that didn't get much of a fair shake in being in the stories.

Refreshing story take from the usual story ideas in the section. Not enough side characters are used and they are in abundance. I'm curious to see how this will unfold with these two particular characters.